whole new story, whole new attempt at my comics. Trying to be legit will take me much longer than a night a page now though. :/ I'd love to hear some feedback on the new look and anything really. Still in progress so remember that!!
well the base sketch quality of this comic page looks great so far. If your gonna add to it further with digital editing software then I'm certain the final product will look just as spectacular. Can't really comment on anything else other than that at the moment, the panel arangement seems unusual but then the context of the speech bubbles might be fitting. However I cannot read them at this resolution, so I could be wrong. : d